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Aside from some general polishing and grammar cleanup, what in the world does "It is said that the ashes that came off the fire turned into 305's." mean? General info about the tribe that created the Dzunukwa is also lacking- their native continent, for example.
Other person here. I am confused about the meaning of this sentence, and am thinking it might be incorrect: "She is also described having No hair that Shins around her head, as if it was being reflected by the sun." Her hair "Shins"? And "Shins" is a proper noun? Also, right before that it says she has "No hair", where "No" is also capitalized. Is this somehow right? 198.146.216.221 (talk) 15:09, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
"She is also described having No hair that Shins around her head, as if it was being reflected by the sun." edit
Actually the hair is supposed to be bedraggled in appearance. Somebody gives a very complicated description for this, so I decided to change it with a reference.--Rochelimit (talk) 23:58, 1 February 2011 (UTC)
Pale skin? edit
Most sources said she has a black hairy skin? So I'm not very sure with this description. I decided a 'citation needed' template on that part.--Rochelimit (talk) 23:58, 1 February 2011 (UTC)