Talk:Dwight's Speech/GA1

GA Review

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

   I think the second paragraph should be expanded a little. Only by a sentence or two. The sentence about Rolling Stone should use The Office's, not The Office's

   Done and done --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:19, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   "This episode was the second episode of the series directed by series creator Charles McDougall. McDougall had previously directed the second season episode "Christmas Party"." Needs a references and isn't Greg Daniels the creator? I don't see a reference for the air date. The reference for Paul Lieberstein says that he plays Toby, if he wrote the episode, that needs a reference as well.

   Corrected --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:19, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   No TV Ratings info?

   Added --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:19, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

   Full stop after "Dwight delivers his passionate speech"

   I'm sorry, what are you asking me to do? --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:19, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

   A period after "Dwight delivers his passionate speech". I corrected it.

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   I'm holding the article for now, but if these points can be address, i'll pass it.