Talk:Dumped/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Dalejenkins in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
We have a few issues with this article. Firstly the lead is not long enough and does not integrate all the sections present in the article. The lead should be an abbreviated version of the main article. Thus, you need to include content from the sections 'Pre-series publicity', 'Reaction' and 'Controversy'. Also, it is not clear in the article whether the show was successful or not. In thie viewing figures section, there are a lot of numbers given, but no real interpretation. What do those numbers mean? Will the show return? Please address these concern and get back to me. Zeus1234 (talk) 16:37, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
- All of these requests have been altered :). Dalejenkins | 13:17, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- HOORAY! We passed! :D Dalejenkins | 16:22, 7 September 2008 (UTC)