Talk:Dua Lipa (album)/GA2

Latest comment: 2 years ago by LOVI33 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:23, 18 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • The image's non-free use rationale looks good.
  • Add WP:ALT text to every image used in the article.
  • Change some uses of "in order to" to just "to" as it is less wordy.
  • Add a hyphen between "high quality".
  • Add a hyphen between "most streamed".
  • "a X Factor commercial" → "an X Factor commercial"
  • "due to the fact that" → "because" (less wordy)
  • Remove MOS:CONTRACTIONS ("didn't" / "wasn't" / "isn't")
  • "cowriters" → "co-writers"
  • "where written" - typo?
  • Add commas after every use of "however".
  • "concluded my mentioning" → "concluded by mentioning"
  • Add a hyphen between "self identification".
  • Described by Lipa "one of → Described by Lipa as "one of
  • "it's title" → "its title"
  • "it's meaning" → "its meaning"
  • "explained the title saying" → "explained the title by saying"
  • Add a hyphen between "ninth best".
  • "In the June 2017" → "In June 2017"
  • #Track_listings needs sources for verification.
    • Per MOS:ALBUM, track listings don't need explicit citations since it is assumed the album's itself (or liner notes) are being cited. LOVI33 05:20, 20 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Mark references from GQ with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
  • We Got This Covered is not reliable so remove its use.
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:09, 19 July 2021 (UTC)Reply