Talk:Dreams and Nightmares/GA1
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Reviewer: 100cellsman (talk · contribs) 22:04, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
Hi Kyle! I figured it was time for me to review your GA nominations out of reciprocation since you helped out with mine. I'll get to this one soon! 웃OO 22:04, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
"The album was named to year-end lists for 2012" needs copy edit
" heavily appreciated," just say appreciated.
Done --K. Peake 09:18, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
"In a May 2012 interview for The Juice" should The Juice be italicized?
Not done I think it was a publication, not a magazine --K. Peake 09:18, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
"though he was angry at having to share handcuffs with the Rolex watch on his wrist" I almost thought this was irrelevant, until I later read that it served as inspiration for the cover art. Perhaps these should be put together.
"seems obvious" -> seemed obvious
"He acknowledged "a tedious responsibility" of following standards for debuts through the likes of "sweeping themes" and reflective lyricism, concluding Mill's execution is competent and the "stuffy backward focus" fails to compliment him" I found this very wonky.
- Done for the above --K. Peake 09:18, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
This is all I could say, hope to hear from you! 웃OO 05:59, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
- 100cellsman Thanks for this review, I have implemented everything apart from one change that I have clarified above. --K. Peake 09:18, 30 May 2023 (UTC)