Talk:Doug Fisher (American football)

Latest comment: 6 months ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Doug Fisher (American football)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 17:32, 19 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Notes edit

  • Added Category:Junior college men's track and field athletes in the United States
  • Changed defensive tackle cat to linemen since aricle doesn't mention tackle
  • "He placed high in several tournaments and set divisional records in the sport" Source only says he set one record. Also, doesnt say anything about tournaments.
    • Reworded sentence.
  • Is CCJCAA the correct abbreviation? When I google that, this article is the first thing that appears.
    • There seem to be several different names for it - this source (the one used in that part) calls it the CCJCAA - there's some others calling it that.
  • "all-conference selection" Is that the CCJCAA selection in the infobox?
    • Yes - should I reword it?
  • All-Coast means Pacific Coast Athletic Association right? I suggest pipelinking it in the article and infobox
    • Appears so - linked.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 17:32, 19 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 23:34, 22 October 2023 (UTC)Reply