Talk:Dominican Republic men's national basketball team
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Introduction edit
The introduction paragraph is terrible. I only stumbled on the article, so I know nothing much about the Dominican national basketball team, but someone who knows more should clean that up.
Totally agree. Some aspects of this article seem more like something that should be written in a newspaper, instead of an online encyclopedia. I considered deleting all of those, but decided that the article was a little enriched by the inclusion of these "newslike" sections. Instead, I decided to clean it up by fixing the numerous grammar/spelling issues. There is another little section near the bottom: "Player Updates: Carlito Malalos" which is also equally subpar as the opening is.
Hyperlink to Edgar Sosa edit
I'm not sure how the template used to create the table works, so I don't know how to fix this problem (nor do I even know if there is a way to fix it), but following the link to Edgar Sosa takes you to the page Edgar Sosa (boxer) when in fact it should take you to the page Edgar Sosa (basketball). Like I said, I don't even know if there is a way to fix this, but someone who is more in the know about Wikipedia's templates than I should take a look at this and see if anything can be done. Thanks. 74.138.208.181 (talk) 05:02, 17 August 2011 (UTC)