Talk:Dolls and Dolls/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:28, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Overall this is a good article, I just have a couple small concerns:

• "She liked the show, due to it being "hysterical" and with "really good writing"."I'd prefer a cite at the end of this sentence, though it's probably cited later.
• "Though, it finished in 13th place in the weekly ratings for the week of April 21–27, 2003." Doesn't sound quite right. I'd just get rid of 'though'.
  • Done [on both]. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:32, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Just those two things. I'll put it on hold and fail it cuz you're in my wikicup bracket pass it when they're fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:28, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

I hope I got your two things... that doesn't sound right. ;) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:32, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Yup, you've taken my two things and popped them where they should be :P. The rest looks good so it's now a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 20:12, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:26, 6 April 2010 (UTC)