Talk:Dolls and Dolls/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by ThinkBlue in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:28, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Overall this is a good article, I just have a couple small concerns:

  • "She liked the show, due to it being "hysterical" and with "really good writing"."I'd prefer a cite at the end of this sentence, though it's probably cited later.
  • "Though, it finished in 13th place in the weekly ratings for the week of April 21–27, 2003." Doesn't sound quite right. I'd just get rid of 'though'.

Just those two things. I'll put it on hold and fail it cuz you're in my wikicup bracket pass it when they're fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:28, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

I hope I got your two things... that doesn't sound right. ;) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:32, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
Yup, you've taken my two things and popped them where they should be :P. The rest looks good so it's now a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 20:12, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the review. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:26, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply