Talk:Dolichovespula norwegica

Review of Article

In reviewing this article, I made some grammar changes as well as punctuation and capitalization changes. Each section is well written and detail oriented. Instead of only putting a citation at the end of each paragraph, at least put one at the beginning of the paragraph even if the information in the paragraph is from the same source. The in-text citation should not wait until the end of the paragraph to be listed. This is specifically in “Nests,” “Colony Cycle,” “Worker Queen Conflict,” “Worker Policing,” and potentially a few others. There is also contradicting information in the "Colony Cycle" section. Mhimmelrich (talk) 02:05, 3 October 2014 (UTC)

Overview

I added a sentence in the overview about this species becoming a pest because it is a changing trend, and I thought it was worth mentioning as a distinct information.--Dwjoanne (talk) 16:12, 30 September 2014 (UTC)

Description and Identification

It appears that the text under this category was directly copied from the source ( this website http://www.the-piedpiper.co.uk/th4d.htm). While this website provides general information of the physical characteristics of the species, it should not be directly copied, word for word, on the entry. I will use this source in my research of these species but any information I present will be paraphrased. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Elee715 (talk • contribs) 19:30, 22 September 2014 (UTC)

Nesting

I separated some information under "Description and Identification" and moved under "Nesting" because they seemed to be two major ideas. --Dwjoanne (talk) 16:12, 30 September 2014 (UTC)

Italicizing

I think there were some genus and family names that you missed to italicize. --Dwjoanne (talk) 16:12, 30 September 2014 (UTC)

Taxonomy and phylogeny

The information under this category seems more appropriate for "Description"? It would be helpful to have some information about the origin of their names, (i.e. why norwegica? Is this because the species is native to Norway?) When was the name first made? --Dwjoanne (talk) 16:12, 30 September 2014 (UTC)

Colony Cycle

The first sentence mentions, "Every colony starts around late summer", but the third paragraph says, "The colony cycle of D. norwegica is short because these species have a tendency to start in the spring."? --Dwjoanne (talk) 16:12, 30 September 2014 (UTC)

Peer Review

Overall, this article was extremely interesting and hit on many different topics in-depth. There were some minor changes I made in regards to typos and grammar. One way to avoid these errors would be to put your edits into a word document before submitting them on the page. That way you can spell check to spot small errors and re-read them to fix grammatical errors.

Some other things I'd like to see include an expansion on the mating behavior section. It only talked about the males even though the queens and even the workers could play a role in reproduction. In terms of the workers reproducing, I based it off of the following sentence: “It is also likely that in order for workers to reproduce, it is too costly because it can reduce colony productivity and/or obstruct reproduction of females in the colony.” This sentence was a little confusing and I would advise rewording it since it contains valuable information. Other things I would suggest adding include hyperlinks or descriptions of uncommon definitions since the average reader will not be able to understand everything fully. One smaller thing would be to clarify your nesting section. You provide one example of a nest and I'm not sure whether the characteristics of that one nest remain common among other nests as well. If so, make it sound like these are normal attributes. If not, discuss what an average nest looks like. Once again, this article went incredibly in-depth and with these small additions I believe you'd be in good shape. Peter Eivaz (talk) 20:49, 2 October 2014 (UTC)

Popular in scotland??/

This wasp is most definitely not "popular" in Scotland. Nobody keeps it as a pet. Populous or Common may be true but not "Popular" — Preceding unsigned comment added by 151.228.156.103 (talk) 20:47, 20 June 2015 (UTC)

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