Talk:Diwali (The Office)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Ruby2010 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 04:15, 19 July 2012 (UTC)Reply


Issues

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General

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  • No dab links. Great work!
  • No dead links. Great work!
  • The rationale for the image needs to be expanded
  • I agree. I've removed it, as the rationale was insufficient and the resolution was too large.

Infobox

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  • Add "running time"
  • Done
  • "List of The Office (U.S. TV series) episodes" → List of The Office (U.S.) episodes"

Lede

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  • Done
  • Explain what a "rating" is. Nielsen ratings, etc.
  • The lead is meant to be brief; I've added a link to Nielsen Media Research to help readers, but don't think anything else is needed here

Synopsis

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  • bicycle to work → bikes to work
  • Done
  • Done

Production

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  • Nothing is there

Reception

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  • Explain what a "rating" is. Nielsen ratings, etc.
  • Similar to above. I've added a link to Nielsen Media Research and changed "ratings" to "ratings share". Otherwise, I think everything is sufficiently explained (4.2 percent of all 18-49 yr olds etc).
  • Television Without Pity graded the episode with an A → Television Without Pity gave the episode wih an "A" grade
  • Done

References

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  • Ref. 3, 7, 11, 13, 14, 15, 16: All of them need publishers. If you don't know, click on the article for it
  • I understand what you're saying, but this is not a requirement of the GA criteria. :) I prefer not to add this information (I think the work/publisher parameters are enough).
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  • Link NBC.com in the section
  • Done

Good work! TBrandley 04:06, 22 July 2012 (UTC)Reply