Talk:Divya Saxena

Latest comment: 2 years ago by SL93 in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk22:18, 1 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Created by Bahnfrend (talk). Self-nominated at 08:01, 22 April 2022 (UTC).Reply

  •   @Bahnfrend: New enough and long enough. QPQ present. Looks good from a reference standpoint. But I'm really not sure about this hook. From reading the obstructing the field article, this is clearly a very rare event. Our readers that understand cricket will understand why this would have, ahem, sparked a row. But this isn't very obvious to me. Is there a way to reword this in a way that might make it more accessible to readers that don't know the sport and provide some context? Perhaps... Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 06:44, 25 May 2022 (UTC)Reply
ALT0a: ... that Canadian cricketer Divya Saxena was almost dismissed for allegedly obstructed the field but was ruled "not out"?
@Sammi Brie: Thanks for your review. Sorry about the slow response. Yes, obstructing the field is very rare, especially in international matches. I suggest the following further modified hook:
ALT0b: ... that Canadian cricketer Divya Saxena was accused of obstructing the field in an international match but was ruled "not out"?
Bahnfrend (talk) 02:55, 30 May 2022 (UTC)Reply