Talk:DisneySea (California)

Latest comment: 2 years ago by DoorKnobbles in topic Edits made to improve the issue of the article

Edits made to improve the issue of the article

edit

I deleted some wordings in "Interactive Programs for Students of all Ages" to make it not written like an advertisement. I also made some changes in "Oceana" as it includes too many quotations. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Winyuen75 (talkcontribs) 05:56, 24 March 2022 (UTC)Reply

I made further improvements on this effort by adding more detail into the lead to give a more well rounded background to DisneySea which mentions its cancellation and also adding another section which goes into brief detail of why DisneySea/Disney Port was cancelled so the whole article doesn't sound like a brochure for DisneySea. DoorKnobbles (talk) 11:13, 25 March 2022 (UTC)Reply

Deleted section "Other Educational Activities"

edit

This section was deleted as it was an overly long quotation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Livitanev (talkcontribs) 06:08, 24 March 2022 (UTC)Reply

Change of language in "Oceana"

edit

This section was reworded as the language used was not entirely appropriate for a Wikipedia article and was written similar to an advertisement. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Livitanev (talkcontribs) 06:09, 24 March 2022 (UTC)Reply