Talk:Diathesis–stress model/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Yash! in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Yash! (talk · contribs) 15:34, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
Will be done till tomorrow. — Yash [talk] 15:34, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
Quickly failing per the following major issues:
- The WP:LEAD should be the article's summary and should not have the topics which are uncoverend in the article body. The lead is too big and introducing topics which are not in the article
- Refs- the refs need formatting. Some of the facts in the article remains unsourced and needs sources
- Overall, the article is nice but I fear if it is complete and covers all major aspects. Maybe a little more content would be fine. This is what I felt after going through few sources in the article. Little more amount of content can be added. 2-3 K+ would be fine enough.
Once addressed these issues, it can be renominated. — Yash [talk] 12:13, 4 January 2013 (UTC)