Talk:Diagnostic Enterprise Method

About

hi all wikipedia users. please this page will be edit in the next weeks so please dont make any change. if you have any suggestiions please let us now so we can change them because this article is part of our assignment. thankyou User:Grrbibi18grrbibi18 01:59, 19 October 2010 (UTC)

almost finish

hi to everyone this article is almost finish if any one have suggestions please let us know.Any suggestions or modifications please let us know so we can make the changes. thankyouUser: Grrbibi18--grrbibi18 05:23, 22 October 2010 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Grrbibi18 (talk • contribs)

paragraphs

Please be sure you write this article in paragraph form... not lists. Also you need citations.Thelmadatter (talk) 12:18, 22 October 2010 (UTC)

comments

• It's looking like you've made a good start!
• There are outline numbers in the headings; this isn't the correct format.
• There are some sections that are completely empty. I know you plan to put more info in there later, but until you do that, you can't just have an empty section. You should delete those section headers until you have some content to fill them.
• I fixed one citation template. Perhaps you can fix the other. Actually, there are still some errors in the one I edited, but at least now it displays the information.
• I see some typographical errors (e.g., "clasic" and "Analisis"). Both Firefox and Google Chrome will underline many (but not all; you still have to check carefully) of your errors in red.
• The "Universal steps of management" and "Labor Analisis" [sic] sections do indeed look too list-like. Try to rewrite it as if you were explaining the ideas to someone... section.
• • Ling.Nut 01:51, 24 October 2010 (UTC)

comments

hi User:Ling.Nut thank you for your comments. i have already correct some of the information and parrgraphs you told us. also i made changes of some of the suggestions our teacher told us to. Can you help us to relate our article to other categories or articles?. Or if you can tell me how to do it i will be glad to do it. Thank you. User: Grrbibi18--grrbibi18 04:27, 26 October 2010 (UTC)

hi partner

hi User:Mcchb0418 I have already upload more info to our article. I also put my citations but i dont know how to correct the template. Please if ypu know how let me see an example so i can correct them later.See you on class. If you have any doubts please tell Ling.Nut so she can help us correct them. User:Grrbibi18--grrbibi18 04:37, 26 October 2010 (UTC)

sections

I have no idea how Labor analysis, the Harvard Method, etc. relate to Diagnostic Enterprise Method. As the article stands now, they look like competing theories. Are they derivatives of the Diagnostic Enterprise Method? Is the Diagnostic Enterprise Method as established by Fredrick Taylor no longer used? If this is the case, you need to make this clear near the end of the Fredrick Taylor section of article. Thelmadatter (talk) 16:36, 27 October 2010 (UTC)

check it out

hi User:Ling.Nut we have finish our article. PLease if you have another suggestion please let us know. Thank you for all your help through this assignment. User:Grrbibi18--grrbibi18 01:03, 2 November 2010 (UTC)

Partner

hi User:Mcchb0418 i have finish adding the information teacher told us. I didnt see any other correction to make. Please check it out so either you or i can correct them. See you on class.:D User: Grrbibi18 --grrbibi18 01:03, 2 November 2010 (UTC)

uh oh

Hello. I'm afraid that I see copyvio (copyright violations) in this page. I certainly see some copyvio from this source:

• Shonali Advani (2010). "Flying High". Entrepreneur Magazine. Retrieved October 24,2010. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |accessdate= (help); Unknown parameter |month= ignored (help); Unknown parameter |trans_title= ignored (|trans-title= suggested) (help)
  

...and there are probably problems with other sources as well. You need to do a better job of summarizing, paraphrasing or quoting. This is actually a serious problem, because it is illegal to violate anyone's copyrights. I hope you'll go through the entire article – from start to finish – and check everything carefully to be sure it is within generally accepted standards for avoiding copyvio. Ask your teacher for help; you can also feel free to ask me on my talk page. Sorry! Good luck! • Ling.Nut (talk) 07:13, 3 November 2010 (UTC)

correct

hi ling.nut we had corrected the India section. Thank you for your help. we also reorganized the article to be more understandable.see you soon and thank you again. User:Grrbibi18--grrbibi18 02:21, 5 November 2010 (UTC)

Revision thoughts:

Much of this page relates to Taylorism in general and not the specifics of the topic. There is also potential to acknowledge the active debate on the legacy of Taylorism in modern economies. MaitiuStiofan (talk) 06:52, 5 March 2024 (UTC)