Talk:Dexter's Laboratory/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Khanassassin (talk · contribs) 10:42, 15 January 2013 (UTC)

• While it's completely fine to use brackets for dates, "voiced by"s, and perhaps "e.g."s, they shouldn't be used in other ways (unencyclopedic) as found throughout the article, including the production section - easily fixable.
• MOS:PUNCTFOOT#Punctuation_and_footnotes: "The new episodes, which ran for two more seasons, had a different production team than the originals since Genndy Tartakovsky was busy working on Samurai Jack[2] and Star Wars: Clone Wars[21] (MacFarlane and Hartman had left Time Warner altogether at this point, focusing on Family Guy[12] and The Fairly OddParents,[13] respectively)." => " The new episodes, which ran for two more seasons, had a different production team than the originals since Genndy Tartakovsky was busy working on Samurai Jack and Star Wars: Clone Wars.[2][21]. MacFarlane and Hartman had left Time Warner altogether at this point, focusing on Family Guy and The Fairly OddParents, respectively.[12][13]"
• "... It features Dexter's family, alongside many of the recurring characters from the Dexter universe, in a battle against a monster that Dexter accidentally released from a volcano as an exchange student in Japan. In this episode Dexter was forced to reveal the lab to his parents, though it ended with their memories being wiped clear of the experience." This doesn't feel like it should be in the production section, but rather in the series overview section.
• Coolio quote in The Hip Hop Experiment missing a reference
• The Hip Hop Experiment section also seems to lack references for the advertisement and music videos.
• The Source and Urb are magazines, thus should be italicized.
• The Dexter video game section seems to lack references - of course this is easy to fix.
• Some of the DVDs also seem to be missing references.
• The reception section is pretty good, but there is a lack of reviews, and Dexter's surely been on more top lists then just the IGN one.

Not far off, not far off at all, just a bit if fixin' up is needed. --Khanassassin ☪ 10:42, 15 January 2013 (UTC)

All issues taken care of with the exception of the Toon Tour of Mysteries DVD, which doesn't have an exact release date. Let me know what you think about the other changes I made. :) Paper Luigi ^{T • C} 04:44, 16 January 2013 (UTC)

Nice work! Changed just a bit myself, but it's a Pass! Congrats! Although you should get a ref for that DVD, it doesn't need to have a full date. --Khanassassin ☪ 10:59, 16 January 2013 (UTC)