Talk:Desert Strike/GA1

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Latest comment: 15 years ago by Kung Fu Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    See note
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

Passing GAN. There's one minor thing though...in the reception section, you repeat several times "The magazine" at the start of a sentence. It's not a major thing that'd break the article for me, but it does honestly come across a little repetitive, and tweaking every other sentence with this like possibly combining it into the previous one were doable would help make the prose smoother.

I have no qualms beyond that, this was informative and a pleasure to read.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 10:08, 2 July 2009 (UTC)Reply