Talk:Denmark–Nicaragua relations
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Hrafn in topic Nonsense sentence
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Nonsense sentence
edit"The Evaluation comprised the assistance to the four priority sectors for example transport, agriculture and rural development, environment and natural resource and decentralisation":
- Does not specify which/whose/what "Evaluation"
- Does not specify what assistance (all Danish government assistance? some subset?)
- Uses the malformed verb 'comprise to' (in English things 'comprise of', they do not 'comprise to')
- (I've already dealt with the fact that it isn't talking "examples")
I had a try using Google Translate:
- It mentions no "Evaluation"
- It seems to indicate that this is all Danish government aid (and that it is aimed at poverty reduction).
- It states that the four sectors are in fact: Agriculture, Environment, Transportation & Education.
I would therefore propose the following:
Danish government aid to Nicaragua is aimed at poverty reduction, and is provided through four sector programmes: Agriculture, Environment, Transportation and Education, as well as support in other areas.
Given the imperfections of Google Translate, I cannot be sure that this is accurate -- but it seems likely to be closer to it than the original, so I'll introduce it unless somebody complains. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 12:08, 27 April 2011 (UTC)