Talk:Democracy in Mexico

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2019 and 5 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Claudia Paine22. Peer reviewers: Prashanth314, Emmaaa00.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 22:26, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review

I thought you did a great job writing this article! This article was organized in an easy to read way, used a large variety of sources, and went in depth about the various historical eras of democratic history in Mexico. Additionally, all of the images you included were a great supplement to the information you presented. However, I would suggest being a bit neutral in your word choice to avoid anyone thinking this article is biased in any way. There were also a few instances of political words which were difficult to follow without further explanation or more links. Additionally, I noticed a few grammatical and punctuation issues, so I would recommend taking another pass through your article and fixing those up. Fixing these issues would help the readability of this article. - Prashanth314 (talk) 05:00, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review

Good job on the article! The article was well-organized and easy to follow, and used a variety of reputable peer-reviewed sources. It was also fairly comprehensive, and touched on all the major time periods in modern Mexico's history. However, I did notice that you had numerous unsourced statements (or even paragraphs) in your article, and many of keywords were not linked the first time they were used. I also agree with Prashanth and think that you should try to make your article more neutral by avoiding terms such as "power-hungry", especially if you do not provide sources to substantiate those claims. Overall, great work, and I can't wait to read the next version of your article! Emmaaa00 (talk) 04:52, 31 October 2019 (UTC)

New Edits for the 2020 Spring Semester

For the new semester's Wikipedia project, I am strongly considering adding to this article. The expansions would focus on adding more information on the PAN and PRD, and details on what parties have historically dominated each state. If anyone has any ideas to be considered, please check out my user page for more details and feel free to leave a comment! Claudia Paine22 (talk) 15:32, 30 January 2020 (UTC)

Finalized Edits for Spring Semester

Hello everyone! I have finalized the project for my class and I have chosen to expand this article. I plan to add more information on the PAN and PRD, along with electoral reforms. If you want to learn more, have any questions or comments, please head over to my user and talk pages! Claudia Paine22 (talk) 23:41, 18 February 2020 (UTC)

FEBRUARY UPDATE: I have finished the initial stage of the drafted edits for my new revisions. I have added information and done a little bit of reorganizing and added more content. Please head over to my sandbox to see it and feel free to leave any thoughts and feedback on my talk page. Claudia Paine22 (talk) 03:03, 28 February 2020 (UTC)

Sandbox Transition

Hello Wikipedians! I've finished writing the updates to this article and have transitioned the work from my sandbox to the main article of this page. Please take a look at the new organization, added information on political parties, and new information under the modern era and let me know if you have any suggestions. Claudia Paine22 (talk) 18:32, 20 April 2020 (UTC)