Talk:Declaration of war by Queensland in 1914

Latest comment: 8 years ago by The Drover's Wife in topic Untitled

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I feel like this article is a bit of an awkward fit for the encyclopedia because so much of it isn't about Queensland. I feel like the last three paragraphs could be easily summarised in half into History of Queensland for some really important context about Queensland's role in getting into the war, and most of the rest of the article should go someplace about Australia's declaration of war. For an article called "declaration of war by Queensland", it just feels a bit odd to me that only the third-last paragraph is about, well, that. The next paragraph is about its fallout, and everything else is basically dense context broader than Queensland. The Drover's Wife (talk) 09:40, 3 February 2016 (UTC)Reply

I agree that the article's focus could be tighter, but this is an amazing topic. It could be rolled into a Queensland during World War I (or similar) article. Nick-D (talk) 10:22, 5 February 2016 (UTC)Reply
@Nick-D: - see Talk:Queensland at the outbreak of World War I! The Drover's Wife (talk) 10:40, 5 February 2016 (UTC)Reply