Talk:Death of Linda Norgrove/Archive 2
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Mootros in topic FA
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sailors
Why is the term sailor used quite a bit in the article? Seems kinda of out of place considering what is being described is an operation launched by special forces and rangers. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.8.192.142 (talk) 00:08, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
FA
I think we can get this to Featured Article standard (though it does need some work). From my checking it needs some copyediting and the lead needs improving (which I began work on) - anyone else got thoughts on what else might be needed? --Errant (chat!) 16:41, 19 March 2012 (UTC)
- Correction and standardization of military terminology. I don't have the time to take on a big project but I'm sure MILHIST would have some people willing to help out on this. TomPointTwo (talk) 17:10, 19 March 2012 (UTC)
- I agree with ErrantX and I also agree on what needs to be done.--BabbaQ (talk) 17:34, 19 March 2012 (UTC)
- TomPointTwol ah, cool - that's outside my own expertise, so we will need MILHIST support. Thanks guys :) I'm going to pick at the article for the next couple of weeks and see what can be made of it. --Errant (chat!) 17:50, 19 March 2012 (UTC)
- I agree with ErrantX and I also agree on what needs to be done.--BabbaQ (talk) 17:34, 19 March 2012 (UTC)
Serious improvement to the lead. Well done! Mootros (talk) 04:09, 29 March 2012 (UTC)