Talk:Death of Cleopatra/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

I eagerly but patiently await your review and critique of the article. Regards, Pericles of Athens^Talk 19:15, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (20% is highest, due to phrase similarities) 3a 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• occurred on either the 10 or 12 August 30 BC in I believe the the should be removed, as 10 or 12 August makes more sense unless it is changed to 10th or 12th.
• while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon are more tepid by stating it was circa 12 August. suggest while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon state it was c. 12 August.
• Charmion adjusting her diademed crown before she herself fell suggest Charmion adjusting Cleopatra's diademed crown before she herself fell
• @PericlesofAthens: That is all my suggestions, passing now. I apologize for taking so long. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:21, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

Pericles' comments

@Iazyges: has the review started? I can't tell. Is there something I should do right away? I guess it's good to know that there are no dead links or missing citations. Pericles of Athens^Talk 13:50, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

• @PericlesofAthens: Apologies on the delays, I've been busy IRL. I'll try my best to start/finish the other reviews within the week. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:06, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
• @Iazyges: are you still busy? Pericles of Athens^Talk 14:42, 17 April 2018 (UTC)

  @PericlesofAthens: Apologies for the long wait, I should have time now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:41, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

• @Iazyges: excellent! I have amended the article according to your prose suggestions. Best wishes, Pericles of Athens^Talk 02:26, 23 April 2018 (UTC)