Talk:Death Whoop
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Tim1977 in topic Please update references
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Passive Voice
editThe phrase "...it was removed..." should be reworked to show who ordered it removed and any possible explanation they gave for its removal beyond the very pov phrase "it was so disturbing...". Please cite a source for whatever you come up with. TheRingess 21:17, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
Please update references
editWhen this is reworked, the references to then-Rep. Ben Nighthorse Campbell, Rep. Don Young, and House of Representatives chief administrator Dan Beard, and the political movements of this painting can be found at: Politicoand NY Times. As evidenced by the previous sentence, I am not one to edit for passive voice or clarity. TIA. Tim1977 (talk) 07:47, 10 March 2009 (UTC)