Talk:David McCormick
Latest comment: 1 year ago by 216.49.27.38 in topic Updates and corrections
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Updates and corrections edit
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Hi, my name is Lauren, and I work for Laurel Strategies on behalf of David McCormick. I am requesting a few edits which will add some updated information, and remove outdated information. Thanks for your time and consideration.
- In the Introduction section, please change "over $160 billion" to "approximately US$160 billion in assets under management"[1] with the updated source.
- In the Education section, please add that he earned a Ph.D. "in international relations" from Princeton's "School of Public and International Affairs."[2]
- In the following sentence please add the full title of the book, which is "The Downsized Warrior: America's Army in Transition".
- At the end of the Education section, please add the following sentence and source: In 2021, McCormick received an honorary degree from Dickinson College.[3]
- In the Career section, in the subheading called "1987 to 1992" please change "leaving" to "graduating".
- In the Career section, in the subheading called "2005 to 2009" please change "G-8" to "Group of 8 (G8)".
References
- ^ GmbH, finanzen net. "Ray Dalio's Bridgewater lost $12.1 billion in 2020 - but he's still the best-performing hedge fund manager of all time". markets.businessinsider.com. Retrieved 2021-08-18.
- ^ "A Conversation with General C.Q. Brown and David McCormick *94 *96 | The G. S. Beckwith Gilbert '63 Lectures". gilbertlectures.princeton.edu. Retrieved 2021-08-18.
- ^ Sheriff, Sarah. "2021 Honorary Degree Recipients". www.dickinson.edu.
I appreciate all your help. L Strategies (talk) 17:12, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
Implemented @L Strategies: I have implemented the requested changes. S0091 (talk) 18:45, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
The main article calls it an "attack" on the Capitol. Is that really accurate or mere rhetoric aimed at baling political hay for Democrats? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.49.27.38 (talk) 15:37, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
Additional updates and corrections edit
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Hi again. Thanks so much to S0091 for implementing my edits above. I would also like to request a few additional edits that also add updated information, and remove outdated information. I really appreciate your help.
- In the Career section, in the subheading called "2009 to Present" please replace "Since 2016 he has served as co-CEO", which is incorrect, with "He became co-CEO in 2017,[1]
- In the section called "Trusteeship & Philanthropy", please remove the Trilateral Commission, Carnegie Mellon University, and Rare from the list of his memberships/trusteeships. He is no longer a member or trustee of those institutions.
- In the Personal life section, Dina Powell is still an executive at Goldman Sachs, so please remove "a former".
- In the Personal life section, please change the last sentence; it should read as follows: They have six children between them and reside in Connecticut.[2]
References
- ^ "Five Questions with Dina Powell McCormick | Bush Center". Five Questions with Dina Powell McCormick | Bush Center.
- ^ "Five Questions with Dina Powell McCormick | Bush Center". Five Questions with Dina Powell McCormick | Bush Center.
Thanks for all the help. Lauren at L Strategies (talk) 21:07, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
Done. Heartmusic678 (talk) 11:54, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks Heartmusic678 for implementing the edits. Your efforts are much appreciated. Lauren at L Strategies (talk) 14:15, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
- @Lauren at L Strategies: You're welcome :D. Heartmusic678 (talk) 18:01, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks Heartmusic678 for implementing the edits. Your efforts are much appreciated. Lauren at L Strategies (talk) 14:15, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
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