Talk:Danny Dietz

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Djmaschek in topic Start class review

Start class review edit

Here are the reasons for Start class (B1=no, B2=no). Djmaschek (talk) 22:45, 7 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • Paragraph 1 under Operation Red Wings:
    • The paragraph has no citation. (B1)
    • It says, "Axelson died hours later". Axelson has no first name and his connection to the incident is not explained. (B2)
  • Paragraph 2 under Operation Red Wings:
    • The last 3 sentences have no citation. (B1)
    • It says all 16 special forces soldiers perished, but there is an "only survivor". There is some confusion here. (B2)
C class. B2 issues were cleared up by editor. Still has B1 issues. Djmaschek (talk) 00:52, 9 November 2020 (UTC)Reply
Issues addressed by another editor, kindly take a look at them. Delta fiver (talk) (UTC) 13:18, 9 November 2020 (UTC)Reply
B class. Djmaschek (talk) 22:15, 11 November 2020 (UTC)Reply