Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit

  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 September 2018 and 8 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dam395.drexel. Peer reviewers: Ams884, Tanyayev.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 18:58, 16 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Dam365.drexel's peer review edit

It's lovely you have used this as your topic of interest. I can see you have made a lot of changes. You've fixed the publication date and also added the necessary citations there. You've also added the feature in "BioShock 2." You've broke up the lyrics by stanzas as well. Kudos for implementing such changes. Msb357d (talk) 01:20, 20 November 2018 (UTC)Msb357dReply

Daddy's Little Girl Review- from Ams884 edit

I think adding lyrics to the page was a great addition. I think a lot of people will find it useful, because people are always searching for lyrics to a song. It is also an extremely sentimental song that often shows up in people's lives. You included proper citations and an interesting addition with the "Bioshock 2" fact. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ams884 (talkcontribs) 02:06, 21 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

peer review - yrk23 edit

I like the idea of picking a song and placing the lyrics as one of the headings. You have many internal links which allow for a very informative article which is nice. It is also referenced correctly. Overall, I think you did a great job at creating an article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yrk23 (talkcontribs) 04:31, 21 November 2018 (UTC)Reply