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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 4 February 2015 (UTC)
Not too many issues here.
Lead section
- "The father overhears and becomes furious before whisking his daughter away to a boarding school." I would change the to her.
Plot
- "The father refuses him and Hal is knocked down" I would remove the word him from this sentence.
Release and reception
- "The film would also be released in Great Britain on October 16, 1910." Change Great Britain to the United Kingdom.
- Link The Morning Telegraph.
References
- Link the publishers of these sources if possible.
Going to place on hold for now. good888 (talk) 12:38, 6 February 2015 (UTC)
- @Good888: - All set. ChrisGualtieri (talk)