Talk:Da Boom/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 01:57, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

• General

1 dab link

Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

• Infobox

File:FGDaBoom.png need to be reduced.

Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

Not done. It should be at least 200px and at most 300px Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 23:44, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, this is the second time I've done that. For some reason I always forget to reduce the image size. Anyway, done now. Gage (talk) 23:47, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

Image needs Alternative text caption, as well as a better caption as other Family Guy Good Articles

Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

• Plot

"of the world and mutating" ... "from mutations" -> overlinked

Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

"As the family then grows hungry," -> maybe is me, but this sound awkward

Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

"As the family walks away" -> family is not a plural word?

There's only one family. Why would it be plural? Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

• Production

second season of Family Guy and the first -> second season of Family Guy, and the first

Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

who had wrote episodes for the show in the first season including "Mind Over Murder". -> Source soes not state it

Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

In Ref 2, RealNetworks, Inc. publish Film.com

Done. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

Ref 3, 4, 5, 8 need publisher

Done. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

This has become a running gag, having reappeared in episodes such as "Blind Ambition", "No Chris Left Behind" and in "Meet the Quagmires".[7] He is voiced by regular show writer Danny Smith.[7] -> Source does not state them. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 01:57, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

Done. Gage (talk) 23:37, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

• Reception

Isn't there ratings about the episodie?

Every effort has been made to locate ratings for episodes prior to 2001. Unfortunately, there is no such information available, especally not from a reliable source. So, there are no ratings information available to my knowledge, as I have attempted to locate them for many epiodes for this season. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

• External links

The "external wiki" fails WP:ELNO

Done. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

On hold one week (August 3, 2010 UTC). Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 01:59, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

I reviewed again and I see nothing wrong so, congratulations the article pass its GAN. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 00:00, 29 July 2010 (UTC)