Talk:DJ Marfox

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Fuhghettaboutit in topic Appears to be ok

Appears to be ok

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Just checked the article over , the tone appears to be ok, it's not overly promotional, doesn't have marketing buzzwords and appears to be sourced. I've boldly removed the tag. If it has to be restated, please give examples of where the tone is wrong. KoshVorlon 17:16, 16 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

"pioneering" "crafted in the artists bedroom" -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 17:56, 16 November 2015 (UTC)Reply
Also "foundational"; "highly acclaimed", as noted by User:Cullen328 at the Teahouse, said in Wikipedia's voice.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 22:53, 16 November 2015 (UTC)Reply