Talk:DJ Got Us Fallin' in Love/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 15:31, 10 August 2012 (UTC)

General

• Couple of suspicious and dead links.

 Done Fixed dead link

Info box

• You don't need to link Max Martin and Shellback twice. I'd unlink them as publishers.

 Done Unlinked

Lead

• No issues.

Background and composition

• was first leaked → a song can only leak once, so saying first is irrelevant

 Done Removed first

Critical reception

• It's either mixed or positive. I'm inclined to say mixed, as you proceed this by talking about a criticism.

 Done Changed to mix

• along "Hot Tottie" and "There Goes My Baby". → along with "Hot Tottie" and "There Goes My Baby".

 Done

• three-and-a-half starts → I think you can work out the mistake!

 Done Woops, corrected to stars

• whilst also → Apparently "whilst" is archaic or something now, so better to say "while"

 Done Ok, changed to while

• Though he noted the lyrics as repetitive, but stated → Despite citing the lyrics as repetitive, he thought

 Done Changed to your suggestion

Chart performance

• 2×/4× → We just write two times/four times

 Done

Music video

• No issues.

Live performances

• No issues.

Track listing

• No issues.

Credits and personnel

• No issues.

Charts and certifications

• The US charts should be in order, so Hot 100, then A/C, then Adult Pop, the Hot Dance, then Hot R&B.

 Done

• Can you make the two year end charts the same width length.

 Done

Release history

• No issues.

References

• Rap-Up is the work, Devin Lazerine is the publisher.

 Done

• FN39/40: Remove That Grape Juice. Big no no. Hugely unreliable, bias and self published website who have no qualifications.

 Done Oh, did not know that. Removed and replaced with reliable sources.

Summary

Oh hold. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 11:07, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

I think everything is good now. Rayman^{95 (talk)} 18:02, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

Passing. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 12:31, 20 August 2012 (UTC)