Talk:Cyclone Sagar/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Yellow Evan in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 18:17, 3 December 2018 (UTC)Reply


Will do. YE Pacific Hurricane 18:17, 3 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • "Along its rare trajectory through the Gulf of Aden, Cyclonic Storm Sagar dropped rainfall in portions of coastal Yemen, northern Somalia, Djibouti, and Ethiopia.[15]" Yemen shouldn't be linked twice in the body. I mean this is an understanable mistake considering you did the impact first but still it id already linked in the MH. YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • "Yemen's temporary capital Aden was hit by strong winds as tropical cyclone Sagar approached, prompting authorities to a call on residents to evacuate areas near the shore in the southern port city.[16]" and here too. YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Yellow Evan: - how is it now? ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

I'll pass this as soon as I save my edit. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:47, 2 January 2019 (UTC)Reply