Cyclone Osea has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: June 8, 2013. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 02:20, 5 June 2013 (UTC) Review will commence in a few days. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:20, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
Lead and infobox edit
Both fine.
Meteorological history edit
"...to the northeast of the Northern Cook Island: Manihiki." "...to Manhiki, in the northeastern Cook Islands." This is more suitable for a reader unfamiliar with the region.
- I personally prefer the current wording as its a lot easier to understand and more factually correct since Manhiki is more in the Central Northern Cook Islands.Jason Rees (talk) 22:58, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
"...French Polynesia sialnd group." Island group.
- Changed to just French Polynesia.
"...the low level circulation center due to increased wind shear." Please wikilink wind shear.
- Unless im mistake WP:Overlink prevents us from linking it twice (its linked in the lead).Jason Rees (talk) 22:58, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
Preparations, impact, and aftermath edit
Please wikilink Scilly.
Conclusion edit
A very nice concise article. I will pass when everything has been addressed. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 20:57, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
- Should be sorted.Jason Rees (talk) 23:01, 7 June 2013 (UTC)