Talk:Cyclone Lin/GA2

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I like this article for the most part, but I have a few "minor" fixes until I feel that it is upto GA standards.

1. Over the next few days, the depression moved towards the southeast through the Fijian archipelago until late on April 3, when the Regional Specialized Meteorological Center in Nadi reported that the depression had intensified into a category one cyclone, and named it as Cyclone Lin whilst the JTWC did not start issuing warnings on Lin until the next day as it was approaching its 10-minute peak windspeeds of 110 km/h (65 mph) and 1-minute peak windspeeds of 95 km/h (60 mph). Is there anyway that you could break that up into multiple sentences?

DoneJason Rees (talk) 20:51, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

1. Cyclone Lin then reached its peak windspeeds early on April 5 as it passed directly over Tonga and then later that day as it approached the edge of RSMC Nadi's area of responsibility Lin started to go through an extratropical transition with the JTWC issuing their last advisory on it. Same as above

DoneJason Rees (talk) 20:51, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

1. Late on April 3, RSMC Nadi reported that the depression had intensified into a category one cyclone, on the Australian tropical cyclone intensity scale and named it as Lin whilst it was relocated to about 135 km (85 mi) to the south-west of Niuafo'ou. what was relocated?

DoneJason Rees (talk) 20:51, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

These are the few "minor" fixes that need to be done before being passed. --Anhamirak 20:22, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Sorry got delayed by Advisory time disscussion.Jason Rees (talk) 20:51, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Passing --Anhamirak 21:02, 15 August 2009 (UTC)