Talk:Cromwell's Castle

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Nick-D in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nick-D (talk · contribs) 03:05, 31 August 2016 (UTC)Reply


Comments

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Great work as usual with this article. I only have some minor comments:

  • "the Isles had been Royalist supporters" - this sounds a bit odd (eg, that the islands were supporting the Royalists) - perhaps tweak it to something like "the leaders of the Isles were supporters of..."?
  • "made from massive pieces of rubble" - was the rubble from a previous construction, or was this local rock?
  • It might be worth noting that the castle is, according to English Heritage, one of "few surviving Cromwellian fortifications in Britain" Nick-D (talk) 03:14, 31 August 2016 (UTC)Reply
Cheers! Changes made as suggested. Hchc2009 (talk) 19:01, 1 September 2016 (UTC)Reply
Those changes look good, and I'm very pleased to pass the nomination. Nick-D (talk) 10:15, 2 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

Assessment

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:  
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:  
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    C. It contains no original research:  
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:  
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):  
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:  
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:  
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
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    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
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