Talk:Crimean campaign (1646)

Rewriting the article.

Hello @Diannaa

i rewrote the article in order to avoid copyright issues you can find my edited article here [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Crimean_campaign_(1646)&diff=prev&oldid=1176666040]

Let me know if there's any issues. Regards. عبدالرحمن4132 (talk) 06:09, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

You are still essentially presenting the same ideas in the same order using very similar wording. It's too closely paraphrased. Please describe the events in your own words, — Diannaa (talk) 11:06, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Crimean_campaign_(1646)&diff=prev&oldid=1177213124

i have written the article again, let me know what you think. Regards. عبدالرحمن4132 (talk) 18:30, 26 September 2023 (UTC)