Talk:Credit Suisse/GA1
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 18:10, 8 January 2013 (UTC) I will perform this review. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 18:10, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
Lead
editExcellent, and very informative. Set the tone for a great article.
Corporate Structure
editThis structure provides clarity to what would have ostensibly been an otherwise ambiguous section.
Early history
editA great section, detailing the ground-laying of a financial institution. Great job.
Acquisitions, first growth, and First Boston
edit"In 2006 Credit Suisse acknowledged misconduct for helping Iran and other countries hide transactions from US authorities and paid a $536 million settlement." Comma after 2006 and, also, is there a specific case article on Wikipedia regarding the misconduct?
All else is good.
- Done No article dedicated to the controversy CorporateM (Talk) 19:39, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
Post-financial crash
editDid any of the indicted employees receive sentences, or just corporate fines?
Everything else is fine.
Done
Financial products
editI will get to this later. Excellent so far. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 06:28, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
The diagram on the right edge of the page is a helpful touch, and the content in very informative. A certain pass here.
Reputation and rankings
edit"Credit Suisse has been recognized by the Asset Triple A Awards." Besides needing a reference for this line, everything is great. Done
Work environment
editA nice touch.
Conclusion
editAll in all, this is a very informative article, and I feel that upon the above proposed changes being made, I can and will pass this article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 17:01, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
- All done. Thanks so much! CorporateM (Talk) 23:01, 24 January 2013 (UTC)