Talk:Credit Suisse/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by CorporateM in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 18:10, 8 January 2013 (UTC) I will perform this review. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 18:10, 8 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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Excellent, and very informative. Set the tone for a great article.

Corporate Structure

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This structure provides clarity to what would have ostensibly been an otherwise ambiguous section.

Early history

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A great section, detailing the ground-laying of a financial institution. Great job.

Acquisitions, first growth, and First Boston

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"In 2006 Credit Suisse acknowledged misconduct for helping Iran and other countries hide transactions from US authorities and paid a $536 million settlement." Comma after 2006 and, also, is there a specific case article on Wikipedia regarding the misconduct?
All else is good.

  •   Done No article dedicated to the controversy CorporateM (Talk) 19:39, 19 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Post-financial crash

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Did any of the indicted employees receive sentences, or just corporate fines?
Everything else is fine.   Done

Financial products

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I will get to this later. Excellent so far. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 06:28, 18 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
The diagram on the right edge of the page is a helpful touch, and the content in very informative. A certain pass here.

Reputation and rankings

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"Credit Suisse has been recognized by the Asset Triple A Awards." Besides needing a reference for this line, everything is great.   Done

Work environment

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A nice touch.

Conclusion

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All in all, this is a very informative article, and I feel that upon the above proposed changes being made, I can and will pass this article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 17:01, 24 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

All done. Thanks so much! CorporateM (Talk) 23:01, 24 January 2013 (UTC)Reply