Talk:Courier (Akudama Drive)

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Some Dude From North Carolina in topic GA Review

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Hey @Tintor2: I will help improve this as much as I can, but it will have to be sporadic due to my schedule. Horsesizedduck (talk) 15:27, 5 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

@Horsesizedduck: Thanks. Don't rush yourself.Tintor2 (talk) 22:34, 5 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Courier (Akudama Drive)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:48, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Add a short description and then WP:ALT text to every image.
  • Add the italic dab template below the short description.
  • "the cast of film Reservoir Dogs" → "the cast of the film Reservoir Dogs"
  • "pleased with visual appearance" → "pleased with the visual appearance"
  • "as main character" – reword
  • "looked forward to generate" → "looked forward to generating"
  • "any Akudama was intense" – reword
  • "looked forward to see" → "looked forward to seeing"
  • "protraying", "shotp", "lbabeled", "amputted", "assitance", "mulitple", "enenmies", "advanace", and "conmemoration" – typos
  • "the series' finale" → "the series finale"
  • "from Danganronpa franchise" → "from the Danganronpa franchise"
  • "last request for to conclude" → "last request to conclude"
  • "The character is also collaboration illustration" – reword
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. Thanks for the review. Feel free to point any missing issue.Tintor2 (talk) 20:14, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

A short description is still missing. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:04, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Wikipedia:Short description (template) – Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:06, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for adding it. Some issues have not been addressed, such as rewording "any Akudama was intense" and changing "the series' finale" to "the series finale". Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:14, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
I think those might have been the only ones. Passing the article.   Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply