Talk:Courier (Akudama Drive)

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Hey @Tintor2: I will help improve this as much as I can, but it will have to be sporadic due to my schedule. Horsesizedduck (talk) 15:27, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

@Horsesizedduck: Thanks. Don't rush yourself.Tintor2 (talk) 22:34, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:48, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add a short description and then WP:ALT text to every image.
• Add the italic dab template below the short description.
• "the cast of film Reservoir Dogs" → "the cast of the film Reservoir Dogs"
• "pleased with visual appearance" → "pleased with the visual appearance"
• "as main character" – reword
• "looked forward to generate" → "looked forward to generating"
• "any Akudama was intense" – reword
• "looked forward to see" → "looked forward to seeing"
• "protraying", "shotp", "lbabeled", "amputted", "assitance", "mulitple", "enenmies", "advanace", and "conmemoration" – typos
• "the series' finale" → "the series finale"
• "from Danganronpa franchise" → "from the Danganronpa franchise"
• "last request for to conclude" → "last request to conclude"
• "The character is also collaboration illustration" – reword
• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. Thanks for the review. Feel free to point any missing issue.Tintor2 (talk) 20:14, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

A short description is still missing. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:04, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

• • @Some Dude From North Carolina: Added the artist for the infobox image and described the scene of he driving the bike. Is there any something that might make it hard to understand?Tintor2 (talk) 23:03, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Short description (template) – Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:06, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

• @Some Dude From North Carolina: Ah, I wasn't familiar with such guideline. Added to the top of the article.Tintor2 (talk) 23:10, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for adding it. Some issues have not been addressed, such as rewording "any Akudama was intense" and changing "the series' finale" to "the series finale". Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:14, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

• @Some Dude From North Carolina: Reworded those two. By chance could you tag the ones needing revision? I'm kinda lost.Tintor2 (talk) 23:21, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

I think those might have been the only ones. Passing the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 27 July 2021 (UTC)