Talk:County Route 166 (Sullivan County, New York)/GA1

GA Review

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Comments:

1. Place a request for a shield of the route
2. Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
3. Also request shields for other county routes CR 166 intersects
4. Remove "Exit 112" from infobox
5. Replace "in the county alone" with "within the county"
6. Place last sentence in lead in preceding paragraph
7. The second sentence in the route description sounds unclear and awkward: try clarifing and rephrasing
8. In fourth sentence of route description, remove "homes"
9. "a dead-end highway that intersects near the eastern terminus" sounds awkward, try rephrasing
10. Replace "the homes re-emerge" with "the route heads through residential areas again"
11. Why is a picture of Exit 98 of the Quickway included in the article? It does not relate to CR 166. I would suggest getting a picture of the actual route, if possible
12. "in the by"? Awkward, needs to be fixed
13. In first sentence of history, replace "of the" with "for"
14. In last sentence of history, indicate CR 166 applies to this former portion of NY 17
15. Is the mileage known for the junctions along CR 166?

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 01:53, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

All done.Mitch32^{(Go Syracuse)} 20:20, 4 February 2009 (UTC)