Talk:Counseling (The Office)/GA1
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 16:44, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
- I did some minor copy editing. Please check to see that everything works.
- "a position she fought for a few seasons back," -- in the context of the show, referring to seasons is confusing. Could you note which episodes instead, maybe?
- " Then entry was directed by Jeffrey Blitz, who had directed the previous episode "Nepotism"" -- Is there something wrong with this sentence?
- This marked a decrease in a million viewers and a 14 percent decrease in the 18–49 demographic from the previous episode." -- Any reason for this?
- "The episode became the highest-rated non-sports related NBC program for the original week it aired" -- Are there any specific sporting events which were airing around that time which may have taken viewership from this episode?
- "Joel Keller of AOLTV called it a "vast improvement" from last week's episode" -- You should replace these references to "last week's episode" with the explicit title of the previous episode. Obviously since then Office episodes haven't necessarily aired in order.
- Dup links tool returns one result: Evan Peters
- Dab links tool returns no problems. All external links appear to be working.