Talk:Cork grease

Latest comment: 8 months ago by 161.31.8.20 in topic Welcome

Welcome edit

A lovely quiet corner of Wikipedia, the Cork Grease article. Welcome, relax, enjoy.Cellodont (talk) 18:34, 10 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

In order to provide credibility to the article, more citations need to be provided. This need is presented in the article in the description of what cork grease is made out of and if it is toxic to humans or not. For someone looking into whether or not cork grease is non-toxic, the “citation needed” makes the article look unreliable, therefore, the reader will turn somewhere else for their answers. There is no information on the types of cork grease, what it comes in (sick or tube, or both), how to use it, or other information that is typically found on Wikipedia such as date of creation or even a picture. Without all of this information, this page pales in comparison to more thorough and informative articles on Wikipedia. As a result, the company’s credibility and resourcefulness could be called into question. In order to make the page up to the standards of other Wikipedia articles, these things should be included: more citations, images, explanations of origin/history, description of the types, and potentially instructional use. (Comment made for class assignment for an Intro to Editing Class) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 161.31.8.20 (talk) 16:21, 15 September 2023 (UTC)Reply