Talk:Cool Me Down (Gromee and Inna song)/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 22:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)Reply


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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

I will take this on tomorrow! --K. Peake 22:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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It is common practice to link the artist in the infobox if their real name is used, for clarity.
  • Add "a few" before music critics because only three are noted in this article
  • ""Cool Me Down" lyrically speaks" → "the song lyrically speaks"
  • The commercial performance sentence should be directly after the above one
  • "with the single's release, and the song" → "with the song's release, and it"
  • ""Cool Me Down" was a moderate" → "The song was a moderate" and mention the chart it peaked on was the Polish Airplay Top 100

Background and release

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  • Pipe demo to Demo (music)
  • The poke fun part is sourced, but where is dissatisfaction mentioned?
  • "Andrzej Gromala (Gromee)," → "Gromee under his real name of Andrzej Gromala," to be specific
  • "cover on their social media" → "cover art on their social media accounts"

Reception and composition

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  • Retitle to Composition and reception, as the Wiwibloggs piece mentioning the genre should come first and commercial reception is already last
  • "found that "Cool Me Down" had a" → "observed how "Cool Me Down" has a"
  • "noticed that the song" → "noticed the song"
  • "Czech Republic and" → "the Czech Republic and"
This may be confusing, but there is not "the" in front of it. It's like that.

Music video and promotion

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  • Remove "for "Cool Me Down"" after "accompanying music video"
  • "to the song wearing" → "to the song, wearing"

Track listing

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  • Good

Charts

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Weekly charts

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  • Good

Year-end charts

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  • Year-end chart performance for "Cool Me Down" → 2021 year-end chart performance for "Cool Me Down"

Release history

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks great at 21.9%!!!
  • Use the via parameter instead to cite YouTube on refs 11, 12 and 13, adding Polsat as the publisher for #13

Final comments and verdict

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@Kyle Peake: Thank you very much for your review, I have fixed everything apart where noted. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:00, 31 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
@Cartoon network freak: I am glad to see a response before January has ended, but the wikilink under songwriters should be removed since most reading an article about an artist will already know/guess the real name part and even the Czech Republic article uses the term "the" at the start, so add this. --K. Peake 21:18, 31 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
@Kyle Peake:   Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:06, 1 February 2022 (UTC)Reply