Talk:Conduit (The X-Files)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Grapple X in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 05:40, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • "which would go on become" go on to become
  • "find that her younger brother" Needs clarification as to whose younger brother this refers to.
  • "similarities to his own childhood" Childhood experience?
  • "and has not been seen since" never to be seen again or somesuch? Seems a little disjointed.
  • Lake Okobogee links to a disambig page, should be: East Okoboji Lake
  • I think zeroes is more common that zeros and Webster yields Zeroes as well...
  • "episode they wrote" Space after the dot between the ref. Needs removal.
  • "reestablished" re-est
  • "with the episode being describing it as" with the episode being described as?


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   -->   (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):   -->  
    A few MoS and prose issues, nothing too serious.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   (citations to reliable sources):   (OR):  
    Perfic'.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   (focused):  
    Perfic'.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
    Perfic'
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    Perfic'.
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Perfic'
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 05:40, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for taking the time to review this. I have addressed the points you've raised, taking your suggestions in all cases but the fourth, where I instead just removed the disjointed-sounding clause. GRAPPLE X 15:05, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply
Passed. Good show. That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 15:39, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply
Thanks! GRAPPLE X 15:40, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply