Talk:Con Los Años Que Me Quedan/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:15, 16 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):  
    b. (citations to reliable sources):  
    c. (OR):  
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):  
    b. (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):  
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:  

(Criteria marked   are unassessed)

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 09:15, 16 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • Crescent Moon Studios in Miami, Florida → Crescent Moon, Miami, Florida in the infobox
  • Pipe Emilio Estefan Jr. to Emilio Estefan
  • "It was written by" → "The song was written by"
  • Anglo release of the version is not sourced
  • "It was released as" → "The song was released as"
  • Add what critics praised about the song
  • "Commercially, it topped" → "Commercially, the song topped"
  • Mention the ceremony for Pop Song of the Year

Background and composition

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  • First para looks good!
  • Remove comma before Emilio Estefan
  • Shouldn't you mention the instrumentation here per the sources used in reception?
  • "the lyrics, she chants:" → "the lyrics, Estefan chants:" and cut down the amount of this quoted per WP:OVERQUOTE
  • Ditto for the translation quote, however both should have punctuation inside quote marks per MOS:QUOTE

Critical reception and accolades

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  • "filmic number", and the" → "filmic number" and the"
  • Remove wikilink and re-introduction on Mi Tierra
  • End the lovely melodies quote
  • Pipe ballads to Sentimental ballad
  • "called it "another" → "called the song "another" and re-invoke the ref for this sentence
  • Pipe acoustic to Acoustic music on the direct mention instead
  • "describe as a pop hit."" → "describe as a pop hit"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "gave it three out of five," → "gave the song three out of five,"
  • Remove pipe on Latin
  • "and emotional shading."" → "and emotional shading"."
  • Last para looks good!

Promotion and commercial performance

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Formats and track listings

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  • Good

Charts

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  • Good

Personnel

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  • Make this section the one after track listings
  • Add a space before guitar

See also

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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