Talk:Company (2002 film)/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Ssven2 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 14:28, 1 May 2019 (UTC)Reply


I will review this article. Thank you.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 14:28, 1 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • This is a gangster film as opposed to being just a crime film.
  • "tension arises" — Should be "tensions arise"
  • "after a meeting with a man named Haneef" — Can be rephrased as "after meeting a man named Haneef"
  • "Malik and Chandu kill Saeed and his brother Anis in the rear seat of a car." — Elaborate on who Saeed is to let readers know why Malik and Chandu killed him and Anis.
  • "His rival gang leader and colleague under Aslam's umbrella Sharma, who was in a meeting with police inspector Rathod, is killed." — Who is Aslam and who was the cast member who played him? If he's not that important, remove him from the sentence altogether.
  • Wikilink Home Minister.
  • "Haneef was shot dead a few months after Varma met him" — Did it impact the film in anyway? If not, it seems unnecessary and can be removed.
  • "He later met several crime reporters, police officers and associates of gangsters" — Regarding the film? if so, state that in the sentence.
  • What did Varma mean by "profound-sounding"?
  • Of course, wikilink the references on the first instance of them being mentioned.

That's about it from me. Resolve these comments, Yashthepunisher and the article will be promoted.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 10:53, 3 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Ssven2 All done. Thanks for the review. Yashthepunisher (talk) 20:11, 3 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:  
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
    Pass or Fail:  

Thank you for addressing my comments, Yashthepunisher. Congratulations, the article has passed.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 04:08, 4 May 2019 (UTC)Reply