Talk:Commonitorium (Orientius)

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Review: January 26, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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Latest comment: 6 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:42, 25 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:42, 25 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

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Latest comment: 6 years ago7 comments2 people in discussion

with warnings against its hindrances. To my reading, against is used here to mean about, so I'd suggest you change it to about its hindrances or on possible hindrances if this is true.
Good catch. I have changed it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:32, 26 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
Orientius used the Vulgate as suggest changing to Orientius used the Vulgate translation of the Bible as.

Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:56, 26 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Martin Delrio, who dubbed it the Commonitorium is it known why he chose to dub it such?

Unfortunately, the source doesn't say.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:56, 26 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

two prayers attributed to Orientius suggest change to two prayers which have been attributed to Orientius and then add a comma.

Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:56, 26 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Gen. Quon: That is all my comments. Passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:34, 26 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Thank you! I appreciate the review!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:56, 26 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

No problem. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:01, 26 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

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