Talk:Come What(ever) May/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:30, 26 February 2010 (UTC)Reply

Overall this is a good article, though I have a couple issues:

  • "However, the release date for the album was pushed back until August 22, due to the delay Stone Sour released a music video for the track "Reborn" on April 28, 2006, the video featured footage of the band working on the album in the studio." Sentence is a run-on, should be split into a couple.
  • "The third single from the album "sillyworld" began receiving radio airplay in November 2006." I think Sillyworld's supposed to be capitalized. If lowercase is right then fix where capitalized. Plus, the way it's written (this and the others) makes it sound like that's the name of another album. Adding commas before and after them all should fix that though.

Just a couple small things; I'll put it on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:30, 26 February 2010 (UTC)Reply

I've made changes to address your concerns. REZTER TALK ø 11:41, 26 February 2010 (UTC)Reply
Looks good; article passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:46, 26 February 2010 (UTC)Reply