Talk:Coach's Daughter/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Hahc21 in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 05:09, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
Review edit
- Comments
- Lead seems Ok to me, as well as the plot.
- I have some concerns with Production. is that all information about the production of the episode? Nothing about how or who write it and which were their influences (as an example)? Or where it was filmed?
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- Okay, but the section is like too short. Would that information be added into another longer section?
- Ratings section is suspicious to me.
- References at Ratings section are inaccessible: if offline, they are from microfilms. If online, I used the NewsBank and ProQuest with a help of my library card number. Is that okay? --George Ho (talk) 06:25, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
- Also, ratings are of prior week of original and subsequent airings of this episode. How are they suspicious to you? --George Ho (talk) 06:26, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
- Reception is Ok.
- Impact is Ok.
- References are Ok.
- I'll make some prose comments later on.
—Hahc21 03:59, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
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