Talk:Close My Eyes (Mariah Carey song)/GA1
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 20:41, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
Good article. Not too many issues:
- It was co-written by Carey and Walter Afanasieff; Carey solely wrote the lyrics, while both she and Afanasieff composed the music. They also produced and arranged the song together. → Don't really like how this worded. May I suggest: It was co-written and produced by Carey and Walter Afanasieff. While Carey solely wrote the lyrics to the song, both she and Afanasieff composed its music.
- "Close My Eyes" is a down-tempo piano led song. → A little short of a sentence. Can it be expanded, or merged into another sentence?
- Dana Jon Chappelle and Mike Scott served as the engineers, while Ian Dalsemer was enlisted as the assistant engineer. → Dana Jon Chappelle and Mike Scott served as recording engineers, with assistance from Ian Dalsemer.
- Numbers < 10 need to be written out.
- with her ex-husband, Tommy Mottola → with Mottola
- When did she perform the song on The Rosie O'Donnell Show?
- that she was written → that she has written
- The references link to books, but there are no bibliography references for them.
- How do you do that? AARON• TALK 20:47, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
- See Madonna (entertainer) as an example. — Statυs (talk, contribs) 20:51, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
- Okay done. AARON• TALK 20:59, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
- Struggled a bit with it, but I finally got it to work. Now, you see if you click on "Shapiro 2001, pp. 99–100", for example, in the notes, it will bring you down to references. — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:07, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
- Okay done. AARON• TALK 20:59, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
- See Madonna (entertainer) as an example. — Statυs (talk, contribs) 20:51, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
- How do you do that? AARON• TALK 20:47, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
— Statυs (talk, contribs) 20:41, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
- Now that everything is resolved, I feel confident in passing the article! Keep up the great work! — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:07, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
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