Talk:Clinton Presidential Center/GA1
GA Review edit
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This article looks great after a quick read-through, though some of the sections seem a little short. Please try to expand it, especially Main Building and History (section lead). More to come soon. Reviewer: Reywas92Talk 02:34, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
- (Er, I add comments here?). yes, I'm in the process of gathering more information (I'm allowed to add substantial content during the review, right?) fetchcomms☛ 03:45, 13 January 2010 (UTC)
Yes, of course, that's the whole point of the review. Here are some further comments:
- There's a misplaced modifier in the first sentence. It implies that the School of Public Service was established by Clinton, but nothing else.
- Write out NARA so readers know what it means.
- "Approximately $10 million of which came from Saudi Arabia." is not a complete sentence.
Also work on expanding the info about what's actually inside the Center. Thanks! Reywas92Talk 01:39, 16 January 2010 (UTC)
- OK, I'll fix the little errors, and I'll add exhibit information as soon as I can find enough. fetchcomms☛ 22:49, 16 January 2010 (UTC)
That seems adequate. I'm sure there's still more that can be said about the Center, but no article can have it all. This passes the GA criteria, but I hope you continue to improve and expand it and maybe even take it to FLC! Reywas92Talk 22:52, 22 January 2010 (UTC)