Talk:Clearwater Festival

Latest comment: 7 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified

Merge Clearwater Festival

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Talk:Hudson River Sloop Clearwater#Merge Clearwater Festival

This could use a rewrite

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As a Clearwater enthusiast/volunteer/guest activist, I'm glad to see this here. But it reads a little too much like an advertising blurb. A little less overt enthusiasm and some more information might be nice - perhaps the move to the community college campus, the environmental questions about the Croton Point site, the activist tables, disabled access and on-stage signers, diverse food, wooden boat displays, and a few of the performers who are particularly worth a mention - like J.B. Hutto, Elizabeth Cotten poignantly performing shortly before their deaths.

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