Talk:Claude Piel

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Espresso Addict in topic Review comments

Review comments

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Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Appropriate infobox should be added
  • Photograph should be added from a source with a free license, if available
  • Needs some copy editing into Wikipedia style and internal links adding
  • Some basic biographical information required, including precise dates of birth/death, place of birth, positions held with dates, etc
  • Lead needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
  • Main body of article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
  • Information on work should be expanded
  • References should be expanded and preferably converted to inline format
  • External links may need pruning, as discussion forums are not usually suitable

Espresso Addict 02:17, 24 July 2007 (UTC)Reply